Under the waves,

The current too strong,

Being dragged under.



Deserted by my strength,

The fight long gone,

Accepting my fate,



No glimmer of hope,

No one to rescue me,

Alone and scared,



Nothing but darkness,

No sign of escape,

Nothing to comfort me,



Closing my eyes,

waving the white flag,

Defeated and broken,


17 comments on “Drowning

  1. Oh dear Moose, I’m so very sorry. I know exactly what you’re feeling. No one deserves to be drowning, most especially not you.

    There is a little life boat out there somewhere. Hang on, dear friend, til it arrives.

    Thinking of you and sending a whole fleet of life boats your way.


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